Screenplay Review: FIDO

In his debut screenplay, Fido, John Norris Ray proves that even small stories can have a massive impact. This heartfelt and suspenseful narrative follows Sydney, a shy 16-year-old girl tasked with a seemingly mundane job: dog-sitting her neighbor Ms. Barker’s old dog, Fido. 

What begins as a quiet day in a small town quickly evolves into a tension-filled tale of bravery, self-discovery, and the unexpected strength found in the most unlikely of allies.

The strength of Fido lies in its gradual buildup of suspense. From the outset, Sydney’s encounter with the mean-spirited bullies Kyle and Jason establishes a foreboding tone. Ray masterfully uses this initial interaction to set the stage for the conflict to come, making it clear that Sydney’s path with Fido will be anything but safe. The script excels at creating a sense of dread, with the looming threat of Kyle and Jason lingering in the background until it erupts into a chilling climax.

But Fido isn’t just about suspense. It’s about heart. Sydney’s bond with the aging Fido feels authentic and deeply moving. Despite her fear, she finds comfort in the old dog’s presence, and their connection serves as the emotional core of the story. Ms. Barker, the warm and wise neighbor, adds another layer of charm to the narrative. Her kind words and subtle hints about Fido’s protective nature create an air of mystery while highlighting the profound relationship between humans and their pets.

The magical twist - Fido’s transformation into a fierce, towering protector - is both surprising and deeply satisfying. In the face of Kyle’s menacing actions, Fido’s supernatural intervention feels like poetic justice. The moment when Fido reverts to his normal, unassuming self is a powerful reminder that appearances can be deceiving and that true strength often lies beneath the surface.

Beyond its engaging storyline, Fido explores universal themes of good versus evil, innocence versus corruption, and the quiet courage it takes to stand up to those who seek to harm us. Kyle’s cruel manipulation and Sydney’s vulnerability mirror real-world struggles, making the story relatable despite its fantastical elements. In the end, Fido leaves viewers with a sense of hope - that even in our darkest moments, we can find allies who will stand by us and protect us, no matter the odds.

As a first-time screenwriter, John Norris Ray demonstrates an impressive ability to weave suspense, character development, and emotional depth into a compact yet impactful script. Fido highlights the enduring connection between humans and their furry companions. This debut is not only a promising start for Ray but also a captivating tale that audiences won’t soon forget.

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In December 2024, John Norris Ray received the award for Best First Time Screenwriter for his debut screenplay, Fido.